Words of Wisdom:

"Beauty is in the eye of the beer-holder." - Affluxlove?

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  • Date Submitted: 04/09/2010 11:50 AM
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Gormaz:
“You! Get off your lazy bottom. What is this lazying around you maggot!?
(get up & sniff then walk away)
“Yes Master.”
Courtney:
“Alice felt very unimportant and humiliated.”
“The next day , Gormaz was sick of seeing his dirty old lake he orderd his best men to go find a beautiful lake for him instead of this old one”
Gormaz:
(walk over and wake Tumi up)
“All you monkey boys! Go and find me a beautiful lake or else …
(FAITH WALKS OFF AND SITS WHIL TUMI ENTERS!)
Courtney:
“So the group of monkeys went off into the dark and lonely forest while Gormaz sat down and ate his food”
(TUMI EXITS AND FAITH ENTERS)
Gormaz:
“Hey you! Go get me a Banana , Hey you! Go get me a fruit! Hey you! Go get me something sweet!, NOW!”
(FAITH WALKS OFF AND TUMI ENTERS PANTING)
Its fine go ahead! ill catch up.
Courtney:
Alice started losing track of the boys so she decided to take a different corner in hopes of finding them.
(OPEN BUSHES!)
But Instead…
(SCREEEEEEEEEM!!!)
Courtney:
“she found a magical place with Rivers, birds, golden bananas, and most of all the river Gormaz was looking for.”
Monkey:
“Oh my word , I have never seen such a Paradise!
“Guys come see what I found!” “Alice was bursting with excitement because of her new discovery, she ran back to her people to tell them about her new discovery. ”
Monkey:
“King Gormaz Y-Y-You have to see what I have found.”
Gormaz:
“Mwehehehehe”
Courtney:
Gormaz:
“HELP!HELP!HELP”
“all the monkeys pulled and pulled but his tail just got stretched longer and longer!”
Monkey:
“ha-ha look how long his tail is! Ha-ha-ha”
Gormaz:
“I guess your right if I hadent been so greedy none of this would have happened.”
Courtney:
“Ever since that day gormaz has felt so alone and awkward was the only one with a long tail. But soon that changed when all the monkeys decided to pull their tail, so that he wouldn’t feel odd.”

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