Words of Wisdom:

"You can't lie unless you learn to tell the truth." - Maituan

Love

  • Date Submitted: 05/09/2010 10:50 AM
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Juliet   wakes   up   looking   at   the   ceiling   and   smiling.   She   is   very   happy because,   Rick   the   boy   she   had   a   crush   on   the   whole   year   asked   her   to   be his girlfreind.   She   is   very   happy   that he did   and   all she   does is think   about him. Juliet   doesn’t   have   any   plans for   today   so   she   calls   her   best   friend   Alexa   up   to   go   to   the   mall.
“Hey   Alexa.” Juliet   said.
“Hey   Juliet   whats   up?” Alexa   said.
“Alexa   want   to   go   to   the   mall   after   I   get   ready.” Juliet   said.
“Sure,   I   don’t   have   nothing   else   to   do.” Alexa   said.
“Great,   I’ll   pick   you   up   after   I   get   ready.” Juliet   said.
“Ok,   Bye.” Alexa   said
After   Juliet   and   Alexa hung   up, Juliet   went   to   take   a   shower.   After   she   was   done   showering   she   did   her   hair   and   then   she   was   ready.   She   wore   blue   skinny   jeans   with   her   blue   sweater.   Next   she   went   outside   and   started   her   car   and   headed   out   Alexa’s   house.   When   Juliet   reaches   her   house   Alexa   comes   out   and   then   they   head   out   to   the   mall.   Juliet   and   Alexa   go   to   many   stores   and   buy   things.   After   they   were   done   shopping   they   were   really   tired   and   hungry   so   they   go   to   the   food   center   and   get   food.   They   were   sitting   waiting   for   their   food   when   suddenly   Rick   and   his   friends   come   over   to   where   Juliet   and   Alexa   are   sitting.
“Hey Juliet.” Rick says and gives her a hug.
“Hey Rick.” Juliet said nervously.
“What are you guys up to?” Said Rick
“ Nothing just hanging out.” Said Juliet
“That’s cool, well we got to go now. See you in school.” Rick said
“Ok, Bye.” Juliet said
Before Rick left he gives Melissa a hug and a kiss on her cheek. Melissa, are a girl in Juliet’s class see’s Rick and Juliet hugging. She gets very jealous because she likes Rick. She walks over to Juliet and Alexa in a very mad mood.
“You better watch out.” Melissa said.
“What do you mean?” Asked...

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