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What Would You Do If U Were Invisible

  • Date Submitted: 06/24/2010 11:26 AM
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What would you do if you were invisible?

James was running through the damp street that was lit by several ruptured and fragmented lampposts. He rounded a corner; leading into a dark, dank alley. There was shouting following him and it grew louder as he hid behind a dustbin. His heart pounded and aside from the shouting, it was all he could hear. The footsteps closed in on him. Each footstep rang deafeningly in his head. He could see a foot…his heart raced. A bead of sweat dribbled down his face. He felt hot and clammy when the foot disappeared and the shouting ceased. James breathed a sigh of relief as he emerged from the bin.
“Everything would be so much easier if I just... disappeared,” thought James “at least that way these thugs wouldn’t be after my blood.” He was lost in fantasy when his watch started beeping; snapping him out of the daydream and making him dismiss the idea.

As he trudged home, he found a small coin on the floor. James decided to have a look at the queen on it, to do this he had to rub the coin. He was just about to when he received a text from his mum, questioning where he was, so he carried on and entered the crumbling apartment that belonged to him and his mother. He went to his room to find shattered glass all over his bedroom floor, and stone which had obviously been used and a note attached to it:

James=Dead

As well more intelligible lettering, this made James furious because he knew who had done it, the thugs, therefore yet again he wished he was invisible as he slumped into his bed, distressed.

…The next morning he went through his routine until he exited the shower and looked at himself in the mirror. It took him a while to understand why he could see no flesh or bones. When he did realise, however, he screamed!
“Mum!” was the next thing that came to his mind as she walked up the stairs.
His mum looked for him and obviously couldn’t find him; she rang the police to report a missing child, shortly afterwards she...

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