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Childrens Story

  • Date Submitted: 11/27/2010 01:00 PM
  • Flesch-Kincaid Score: 72.9 
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Once upon a time, there was a man who traveled about in lands where there were no signs technologies, no towns or states or anything like the life people currently live.   His name was Bob and he lived amongst a group of people of which he considered his family.   There were only four of them in Bob’s tribe.   There was Meg (his wife), Billy (his brother), and Joy (his sister in-law).   No one knew anything about houses, supermarkets, banks, absolutely nothing.   They survived off of hunting for their food, and gathering their fruits and such as they moved from place to place to sleep and rest.   Then one day, they found a striking land full of meadows, fruits, animals, and so on.   Things they could never envision in their sane minds right there in front of their faces.   Bob and his family were flabbergasted by this place they found.   It was as if they entered a completely different universe. They couldn’t bare to part with their new discovery. . . . So they decided to reside there.   They settled the land and decided they would begin to build a dwelling in which they could inhabit.   They began raising animals as their own and planting food to survive off of. They learned to cook with fire and craft ways to create pottery.   Bob created his own city and ruled it along side of his stunning wife, Meg, and their family. They even expanded their family/tribe.   This led to the first Agricultural Revolution!   Because of this breakthrough and decision to settle life has moved swiftly on its way to advancement in more complex societies and evolution. They domesticated plants, settled in land, and above all gave up their ancient methods of survival in order to move on to larger and more enhanced lifestyles!   Bob, Meg, Billy, Joy and the rest of their tribe forever on lived happily ever after. The end

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