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"were all cheaters but who cares =)" - Shubinantonhitech

Winter

  • Date Submitted: 01/24/2011 08:52 AM
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know I just don't know." shaking his head in resistance. Later
walls had many game heads on them, one of the nicer ones was a
Taking full advantage of her attention I told her as slowly laugh at me but just got that answered her as fast as possible "In the news paper". Stunned at my at my quick answer she told me to bring her the article. So I ran back up the stairs and snatched the paper from my bed. When I got down stairs I laid the article out flat in front of my mom's face. A subtle but shocked look arose on my mother's face, as she sank deeper into her chair.
Shutting off the radio, I sat down next to my dad asking
Well we did that for about a week or so, and then the gas line was fixed. FINALLY, heat!!! Boy was I happy to be back living with the fake fireplace working again, those corny looking logs with a flame coming out of the middle of them. Well I guess I can't complain, I never had to chop wood, unlike some of my other friends.
far from mine. I really didn't know what exactly to think at that time until it all clicked upstairs.
But soon we were back in my neighborhood. We stopped at the local McDonald's to get some lunch. Luckily my dad had gotten his pay check cashed and in the bank the night before. So as we walk into the McDonald's we find surprisingly small lines. I ordered what I always order at McDonald's, a number 7 value meal. This contains two cheeseburgers, large fries, and a large drink. After we all had ordered and finished eating, we drove back to my house.
It was in the middle of winter on a dark smoggy night,
chills were running through the house in and out of my room like
a quiet ghost silently coming and silently going. As I lie awake
in my bed thinking of what the next day should bring, my eye's
start to grow heavy as I doze off. In the distance I hear a faint
booming sound, soon it starts getting louder and louder and still
louder until I could hear nothing but the noise. I was unpleasantly startled and hurried over to...

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