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The Bully

  • Date Submitted: 04/05/2011 04:18 AM
  • Flesch-Kincaid Score: 81.8 
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Hello let me introduce myself. My name is Flowery Daisy (but people usually call me Flowy) and I am 11 years old. My school is called Makes You Smart Or Start (for short, its name is MYSOS, the initials of the schools’ name) and I am in Primary 6 Daisy. This is about the bully in MYSOS.
  My best friends, Rebecca and Sidney were sitting with me at our usual lunch spot eating lunch, we saw the bully called “Big Billy Bull” striding towards a group of Primary 2 kids. Big Billy Bull’s real name is John.
  We stared at them as we knew he was going to bully them like he
was the King of the School.
  We knew better not to interfere but I felt so angry that I really couldn’t stand it but Rebecca saw my look and put a comforting hand on my shoulder. I was so lucky I had friends like Rebecca and Sidney because they always calmed me down when my temper was out of control.
  We saw him pinch them, pull their hair and hit them. Rebecca told us we were monitors so we knew we had to do something about it. I went to John and told him to stop disturbing them politely but he wouldn’t listen, he just told me in a fierce tone “Who do you think you are.” I was filled with anger that he had spoken like that to a monitor, Rebecca and Sidney came to my side and helped me to explain to him bullying was bad but it was no use so we told him we had no choice but to tell our class teacher, Ms. Rosella. He said we could try to tell teacher but he said it would be no use telling teacher and we, too knew that he was right as he acted like an angel in front of the teachers. We saw the children staring at us quarrelling so we told them to go away quickly and they scurried off quickly.
    We left him there standing alone as we really didn’t want anything to do with him. Rebecca went to tell Ms. Rosella and told us to wait for her while she went. When she came down the stairs, we already knew what happened as her look was like she was embarrassed.
  She told us what had happened. She...

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