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Letter About a Nightmare

  • Date Submitted: 04/07/2011 11:59 PM
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Dear Raj,

I hope that you are enjoying a sound health and that the heat is not so unbearable in India. On my behalf, everything is going on smoothly except that I'm tired with the workload at school. Well, let me tell you about a nightmare I had recently, I'm sure that you will shiver when you read my letter.

It seemed that I was in a big haunted castle. The door of the castle creaked when I pushed it. I was paralysed with fear. As soon as i stepped forward, I heard footsteps behind me. When I turned to look behind, I saw that the door which I had just opened was now closed. Inside the haunted castle, there were two staircases leading to thee first floor. On the first floor, there were many red spiders walking. Howls were heard from the first floor.Shivers went down my spine.

Being curious by nature, I wanted to know what there was on the first floor. Thus, I went to the staircase and started walking upstairs. When I arrived on the first floor, I was stunned to see many corpses in coffins on the ground. In front of each coffins, there were the photographs of the persons who died and were put in the coffins.

When I looked at the corpse nearest to me, I saw that it was beheaded. I was horrified and I cried on the top of my voice with my hand over my mouth. The other corpses were cut in to pieces. Some corpses didn't have a hand or foot. The three last coffins were closed.

I was terrified and I rushed down the stairs. When I tried to escape from the haunted house, I was shocked to see that the main door was locked. In fear, I ran around but in vain. In the kitchen, I remarked that there was a window which was broken. As I tried to smash down the window. I heard rattles from the cupboard inside the kitchen.

As I touched the cupboard, I felt a cold breeze inside the kitchen. The cupboard was opening by itself and inside I was horrified to see a zombie with a long, vicious and sharp sword in his hand. It wsa the worst scene. I woke up with a start. I...

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