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The Creation of Asians

  • Date Submitted: 05/02/2011 09:37 PM
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Creation of Asians

      There is always the same or yet similar story of how the universe was created. The world was dark and nonexistent, and God or someone similar created light. From there, he or she created the rest of the universe. There, however, is a story of how the world was actually created…according to the Asians.
The world was not a blob of mystery, lying there in darkness with light or creation to come, yet the world was already created before God’s existence. It all started in the year of -1585 B.T. (Before Time), when Unknown had created the world, as stated again, and had the same intentions as God had created it to be. Dong Bong Shin Ki, as the world was named, was the brother planet of Earth, which was about 7,000 nanometers away. It was atmospherically the same, the land, water, mass; however, all the creations were created beforehand in a second from Unknown, unlike God who took day by day, taking time and pride for creation. While Unknown may be the father of God, therefore all creation, nobody knew about his true existence except for God. The world of course did not have a concept in civilization as today, the five components that comprised of it, did not exist. Race had not been in effect at the time, so the first humans, Yunho and Boa were white. They lived in despair and pain in the Sahara desert. North, south, west, and east was sand everywhere. The heat was excruciatingly terrible to the point where they had to live in an oasis. However, this oasis was not of any ordinary kind, it had plants that grew delicious food, many types included: hotdog flowers and pickle cacti, etc. This was a creation of Unknown as an incentive for living in terrible conditions. Unknown laid down all the needed necessities and objects of entertainment for them to live well. Thus, Unknown left the world unwatched, for Yunho and Boa to blossom the world itself. During the 500 years, Unknown went out to play some Halo on his ZRectangle180. In the 500 years of...

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