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  • Date Submitted: 06/07/2012 07:28 PM
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开头句子:  
  1.   the importance/influence of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate
  2. In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to the influence of advertising on our buying behaviors.
  3. The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years.
  4. There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jails or to let them receive education or job training.
  5. There is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected, while a counter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society.
  6. There is an ongoing debate about the correlation between media violence and violence in society.
  7. My personal view is that studying international news is of benefits to students.
  8. I am not convinced that it is necessary
  9. There is little room for doubt about the convenience brought by air travel, however, when it comes to its impact on the environment, no conclusion has been arrived at.
  10. As far as I know, its benefits are far more overt than its downsides.
  11. This essay will compare and contrast its benefits and downsides.
  12. In terms of standard of living, the gap between the city and the countryside is widening in many countries. there are some forces contributing to this phenomenon/some factors leading to this problem. Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible solutions.
主体:   中心句     什么支持中心句
            从经济角度   科技角度   社会角度 公众角度
              对中心句进行解释或阐述影响(with the presence of advertising, a consumer is able to acquire the latest information in the market, such as properties of a product or service, and thereby make a wiser buying decision)或举例或对比(by contrast, without advertising, a consumer is at the risk of purchasing a product that fails to meet all of his or her needs, because of lack of knowledge of better alternatives in the market)
不要出现准确数字, i(用one’s people)  
结论就是中心句的综合

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