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"Asking why is a waste of breath" - SETH

Someone I Meet in the Claass

  • Date Submitted: 06/28/2012 05:13 PM
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Outgoing, passionate, and straightforward, Annie has always been this kind of person. When I came into the school, she was so nice. She was the first person who spoke to me.
We met during the summer break when we both had Wordly-Wise class. Because it was my first time coming into an American style system, I was quite fearful that my English was not good enough, I was afraid that people would laugh at me. With extremely intense apprehension, I shyly came in the classroom while Annie was walking out the door, and that was how we both met each other. She was so friendly introducing my to the whole class, which swept away my fear gradually. Luckily, everyone in my class was so nice and easygoing. In fact, my English in that class was actually pretty good that helped me to increase much more confidence.
These good days passed very quickly. The beginning of the class was what scared me the most. All the people with fluent English in the school surely would come back. My anxiety popped out again and again. On my very first step I in the school, a girl suddenly hugged me tightly. I was so shocked and surprised. Then, I realized it was Annie. Having a familiar friend was a really good way to smooth my emotions. During lunchtime, when Sunny, a new girl I knew in the summer class, and I were homeless, Annie esthetically invited us to join her at the table, and what she did just made me feel so touched. Moreover, she often offered to help us with our homework problems, which brought it up my grades a lot.
All her actions were so heartwarming. However, she sometimes spoke out so loud that no one could bear it. Because of her loudness, I sometimes felt embarrassed so much that I wondered whether I should keep being her friend or not. At the same time, she did something so touching that I knew I couldn’t just leave her behind. An internal conflict popped out in my mind. I knew that it was not right to abandon someone who treated me so well and if I were a true friend, then...

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