|Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east winds that knive us . . . |Our brains ache from the cold & from what they have experienced. Weather is as brutal as a knife attack. ‘merciless’ = no |
| |compassion, harsh, violence, cruelty. Describes the weather but also the situation they are in. Weather becomes almost a |
|Wearied we keep awake because the night is silent . . . |metaphor for their experience. Links in with worst winter of war when Owen joined trenches. ‘Exposure’ – totally open to |
| |deadly weather. Also ‘exposing’/revealing reality to those back home, young men (whole generation) left exposed, naked |
|Low, drooping flares confuse our memory of the salient . . . |before realities of war. Our – portrays the conditions from the troops perspective. |
| |alliteration of ‘w’ – weariness as in tired but also as in tedium, annoyance, fatigued. Slow ‘w’ sound echoes their |
|Worried by silence, sentries whisper, curious, nervous, |weariness. Silence is concerning – what might the enemy by plotting? Constantly living in tedium & fear for their lives |
| |flares of enemy – searching for their targets (them). ‘salient’ – part of a fortification that projects outward into |
|But nothing happens. |enemy-held...
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