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Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages

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Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages




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Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:
• Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).
• Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
• Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
• Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.

Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.

Criteria + Strengths Comments < Areas for Improvement
Part 1
1. Revise, using feedback from the professor and classmates, your Persuasive Paper Part I - A Problem Exists. The problem has been emphasized but there is lack of transition which is needed to smoothly take the reader from the starting point of the essay into the realm of the problem. And this is due to the undue prolonging of the introductory paragraph. The introduction along with the problem statement must be brief and concise in this regard.
Part 2
2. Included a defensible, relevant thesis statement clearly in the first paragraph. A strong thesis statement is missing in the first paragraph and for the readers it is difficult to identify one in the first paragraph also because too much stress has been given on both the problem and solution. A concrete and concise thesis statement must be incorporated within the first paragraph.  
3. Explain a detailed, viable solution that supports your thesis. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. Viable solutions have been detailed in paragraphs...

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