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Beauty Treatments

  • Date Submitted: 03/21/2010 10:14 AM
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Fat too much attention is given to beauty products and treatments. Do you agree??

In the modern world where body image plays a significant role in the eyes of the public. More people has now placed more attention to their personal appearance. As such, many resort to forking out large sum of money on beauty products and treatments. For some people, this has been done to the extent of putting their health at risk. So here comes the question: “Far too much attention has been given to beauty products and treatments. Do you agree?? I personally agree with this stand.

Firstly, whether in the workplace or school, peer pressure is one of the most significant influence on the attention given to beauty products and treatments. Appearance that is deemed unacceptable to the social norms or perceived to be “ugly” will always be hot topics of gossips and discussions among peers. This subsequently evoke feeling of disappointment among people who have been the centre of focus among their peers as “ugly”. Hence, they would be prompt to pay more attention to beauty products and treatments in order to obtain a more socially acceptable body image and mitigate the disappointment feeling that get from their peers resulting in excessive attention given to beauty products and treatments. For instance, students who are obese are often being jeered by other students as being a pig. This dampens their spirit greatly and become more desperate to seek attention to beauty products and treatments to “save” themselves from the dilemma they are facing.

Secondly, celebrities and pop stars can also make a significant influence on the attention given to beauty products and treatments advertisements of certain beauty products and treatments which are promoted by celebrities would cause a rush among young people to purchase them especially in a frantic manner. Hence, they would be also prompt to pay more attention to beauty products and treatments in order to imitate their idol celebrities,...

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