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Thunder Storm and a Beggar

  • Date Submitted: 04/05/2010 05:53 PM
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I had two worst days ever in my life. One is I’ve seen a very huge thunder storm one is that I saw a beggar. I wasn’t mad I just for sad for him.   As I sat in my one hot summer day playing with my Lego, and I can felt the weather outside was very hot and disagreeable. The sun shone was so bright that it reflex like lighting. The sun shone brightly and the birds outside my window kept perching inside the trees, I think weather outside was very gorgeous, but I was wrong. Suddenly, a dark cloud hid the sun. The wind began to blow. I felt very uncomfortable but it changes very fast. Now the sky was full of black clouds and flash of lighting lit up the courtyard, old houses, and trees. People stream like chickens because the storm was so loud that even people from the inside can hear it. No birds sang any longer, the leaves rustled with the wind and it makes a loud noise like creaking fingers. I put my face outside the window and the wind blew against my face. Than the big drops of water fell very violently, the rain was the size of a jelly bean. I stop playing with my Lego and watching what happens outside. Than the rain poured on the leaves of the trees and the roofs with a very loud noise like beating drams. A brilliant stripe of light filled the whole black sky. Then there was a terrible thunderclap over head, and then the sky was full of roars of thunder. I couldn’t even imagine what is like to been shocked by a thunder storm, but I know it felt bad, really bad. The thunder is still continuing like it won't stop forever, so I went to the living room say my mom watching TV there. I was broad of playing so I asked:
“Mom, can I watch the TV with you?”
“Go and play yourself.” My mom said with madness in her voice.
I shake my head and went back to my room but I don't want to play anymore. So I lied down and listen to the noise of the thunder. And dreaming that everything will back to normal again. I can feel that the rain had stopped and the sky was blue again. The...

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