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Alcohol Is Not Good

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Malama Kamara
Speech 100
Section 094
4/28/09
Topic: Drinking irresponsible.
Specific Idea: To persuade my audience to stop drinking to much alcohol.
Central idea : too much drinking alcohol has cause many deaths in the united states, especially college students.
            Introduction
  I. Drinking irresponsible is dangerous or even deadly. Through homicide, suicide, car accidents and rapes. Most of this irresponsible drinking happens at parties, when they are stress out or when they are hanging out with friends. Especially college students.
  II.   During my research for today according to www.hsph.harvard.edu. I found out that nearly 6000,000 college students are victims of alcohol in the United States, and nearly 75% of female rape victims were rape while intoxicated. In addition to that, hundreds of thousands of students engage in unsafe sex while intoxicated and that is a risk for STDs or unwanted pregnancy. Most college students commit suicide, like 2004 1.2-1.5 students attempt suicide while their were intoxicated.
  III. Drinking irresponsible can damage you in many ways and am here to share that with you.
Main point
Lets me give the first reason why we should drink responsible
  I. During my research at http://ezinearticles.com, I found out that   drinking too much alcohol   take control over your senses. Vision, smell, taste and hearing become less acute. This is a big effect that you don’t want to have.
  i. When the alcohol takes over your senses, you don’t understand any thing at that time. Sometimes you will end up doing things that you wouldn’t do when you are not drunk.   And you might end up getting kill.   The reason why accident take place after drinking irresponbly is because the alcohol has control there sense, they are getting less vision. They can’t see clearly. Most females get rape because they have taken in so much alcohol and it has control their senses. They don’t see, or hear any thing.
  ii. Because of only...

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