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Fight

  • Date Submitted: 06/10/2010 08:41 PM
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Like every usual day I walked to Craig Williams to get my little sister. On my way home I found one of my friends and she said can I go to your house and hang out I responded “yes”. So she came along and she was telling me she had a boyfriend and I was like “oh that’s cool”. Then she was hey can I tell you something else that happened to me when I went with my grandma? I said yes go ahead. So she did and I told her oh that sucks. Then we got home and she wasn’t done telling me about it.

So we continued the conversation in my room and we were whispering for a long time. When we got home my mom was in a shower . So when she came out she saw us whispering and she said hi to both of us and we said hi back. Then I was like mom can I go to the store with her and she said yes so we did. On are way to the store we kept talking about random thing that had happened at school.

Then we got home and it was time for her to leave so she left. Then I told my mom did you know she has a boyfriend and she said yes her mom told me. I was like oh that’s cool. Then I told her she was telling me her boyfriend probably was cheating on her. My mom said you better not get in   there relationship. I said no way she was telling me something else that happened when she went to her grandmas house. So it was okay till that moment and then she called me and told me more things about her boyfriend. So I just listened to her and then we hang up the phone.

Then I told my mom hey mom she called me again. My mom responded you better not be getting in there relationship I was like no never I just listen to her. My mo said I don’t believe you I was like Im not lying to you. I could care less about her relationship with her boyfriend I just listen to her because probably doesn’t have anyone else to talk to. After al that my mom didn’t believe me and then she said why were you guys whispering. I answered she was telling me something personal.

My mom said I don’t believe you so I was like...

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