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Pakistan

  • Date Submitted: 06/25/2010 03:34 PM
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In the name of god the compassionate the merciful
Respected speaker, ladies and gentlemen ……. I thank god once again for giving me the opportunity to address this important international ISSUE.

George William Curtis said

A man's country is not a certain area of land, of mountains, rivers, and woods, but it is a principle and patriotism is loyalty to that principle.

It goes by many names – the land of the pure hearts , the golden sparrow , the wounded tiger   – but, no matter what you call it, the Pakistani flag represents a free and unified country, indivisible, with freedom and justice for all.

  1) But after all the sacrifices that are forefathers gave they did not expect to see Pakistan the way it is being portrayed in today’s world but why? Why? Why? Why? Is it represented like this???
  2) With arson.
  3) Violent riots with brutal preventive MEASURES.
  4) Massacre.
  5) Bloodshed .
  6) Chaos .
  7) Devastation.
  8) or SIMPLY HELL .

  9) But if you take a more closer look .

  10) You will see that Pakistan is a nation on the path to prosperity and salvation .

  11) WE ARE THE 6TH LAGERST NATION , WE ARE BIGGER THAN FRANCE AND GERMANY , WE ARE SURROUNDED WITH   AN ENORMOUS   COASTLINE CONNECTED BY 5 PROVINCES .

  12) WE HAVE A DEMOCRATIC GOVERNMENT   , WE HAVE THE 15TH LARGEST ECONOMY , WE HAVE THE 5TH STRONGEST ARMY , WE HAVE THE 7TH LARGEST POOL OF THINK TANKS !!!!

  13) PAKISTAN IS THE LEGACY OF THE MIGHTY MUGHAL DYNASTY, THE LAND OF THE OLDEST CIVILIZATION WHICH IS THE INDUS VALLEY CIVILIZATION WITH ITS CITY MOENJO DARO , PAKISTAN HAS 7 MIGHTY RIVERS ( BEAS , SUTLUJ ,CHENAB , RAVI , JHELUM , KABUL , INDUS ) , PEOPLE SPEAK ALMOST 20 LANGUAGES ,

  14) PAKISTAN IS ALSO KNOWN AS THE ROOFTOP OF THE WORLD AS 4 OUT OF 14 HIGH PEAKS ARE IN PAKISTAN , PAKISTAN HAS THE LARGEST SALT MINES AT KHEWRA , IT HAS ONE OF THE BIGGEST RESERVES OF NATURAL GAS , PAKISTAN EVEN HAS A ROAD IN THE SKY WHICH IS KNOWN AS THE...

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  1. BRAVO!
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    • Sep 01, 2010 - Evaluator: (humera)
    • u ve writen da truth v really need..i relly appreciate ur essay thnks alot..