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My First Homerun

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March 11, 2010

My 1st Homerun

On April 27, 2008 me and my team had a baseball game at 9:00 a.m. It was held at Prospect Park. At 7:45 a.m. my mom woke me up. I didn’t want to wake up, but she told me that I had a baseball game and I sat up really fast. She made me breakfast and I ate it while I watched T.V. I finished my breakfast and she made me a cup of hot chocolate.
When I finished the hot chocolate I got out of bed and took a towel from our closet. I went into the bathroom and hung my towel up behind the door on the towel rack. I took my toothbrush and the toothpaste, and started to brush my teeth. After I brushed my teeth I took off my clothes and went to the toilet. Then I went into the shower.
When I finished showering I went into the room and locked the door. I turned on the T.V, and took of my towel. I went in my drawer and grabbed the boxers that my cup goes in. I put it in and then grabbed my pants. It was gray with belt loops and a back pocket for my batting gloves. I put on my pants and went into the closet for my uniform shirt. I put it on and then got my navy blue baseball socks. I put it on and stretched it over my pants.
When I finished getting dressed I unlocked the door and went into the closet to get my baseball bag that holds all my equipment. I checked to make sure that everything I need is in my bag. I took my bag out of the closet and went into the kitchen for my pack of sunflower seeds. I put the sunflower seeds in my baseball bag and took my batting gloves out of the bag. I zipped up my bag and my mom said “I’ll meet you in the car”. I went to the shoe shelf and got my baseball cleats. I sat in the sofa and put on my cleats.
When finished putting on I checked to make sure I had everything I need. After that I opened the door and walked to the elevator. When I got downstairs I saw my mom in the car waiting for me. I hopped into the car and she started to drive off. We stopped by my friend Aaron and picked him up too,...


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