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Common Wealth

  • Date Submitted: 09/30/2010 07:57 AM
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I am Ghalib Khalil, a TOP GLOBAL PRIZE winner from Commonwealth.
In This year’s Commonwealth Photography Contest (Worldwide), I just randomly took part
And just after 2 months I was amazed by a email which said that I had won the photography
Award, and secondly with a list showing all other 8 winners. So in my category which is under 18.

I am
1st From Pakistan
1st From Asia
3rd in The World

Just this thing pleased me that I did my part for Pakistan and I am just a Proud Pakistani and will make the scope for its Photographers a bit bigger, after receiving the award in uk by the commonwealth. Along with receiving the award there would be a Gala Dinner Night in which we would be having a Dinner with many his Respectable but The most Important - Queen Elizabeth
Other Then This there would be a full week of educational activities in uk, like visiting BBC Head Quarters and Then The Oxford University Press.   this all will take place from 10 October till 15 October.
Source:   http://www.thercs.org/youth/369
Note:   The attached document is the sponsor letter by commonwealth.

Below   Is   a Request   Letter   Attached

My Request

I was really Pleased when i read their emails and all stuff and was feeling Proud Pakistani , cause i beleive that i have did my best to Crave Pakistan’s Name in Commonwealth, however My Name along with Pakistans name would there be in Media InshAllah, like on news , news paper.

Still there’s something left , which is i have to be there to bring Pakistan such a fame, so   i just started arranging funds for this 6 days Trip , now what i arranged is the visa for me and my mom ( She going as a guardian as i am under 18 ), i payed all visa fees.
Now what i am left with is The Air Tickets and Hotel Accommodation, and what i can do is to choose any one of these because i don’t got much resources to arrange for 400 Pounds for accommodation if i arrange the Air Tickets and Air Tickets if i arrange the...


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