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The Crazy Day When He Broke in

  • Date Submitted: 10/03/2010 10:59 PM
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The Crazy Day, When He Broke In

He didn’t say a word to anybody. He just came up to my mother and already had his knife open. He pulled it out of his pocket and stabbed my mother five times: three times in the chest, once in the arm, and once in the leg. I grabbed the phone and ran outside to call 911. The operator said “ Hi this is 911, what is your emergency?” I reply that my mother my mother has been stabbed multiply times in her upper abdomen and chest. While I was on the phone with 911, I look up at my younger sisters were trying to get him off of my mother. Then my youngest, sister, Jessica, came out of the kitchen with a frying pan. She hit him in the head about three times. She hit him in the back twice and then in the head once. I was shocked when Jessica done that. It looked like Tony was as shocked as I was. Then Jessica and   Brandi kicked and hit him until the cops and the ambulance got there.
Let me tell you a little about the story before I go on any further. My mother and her boyfriend, of twelve years, had broken up for good this time, I guess she was tired of his crap. He accused her of all kind of stuff such as cheating. I don’t think she was, but she is the only one who really knows. Back to the story.
My mother wouldn’t leave until there was somebody to get us. She is stubborn like that sometimes. Well I think that all of us are like that a little bit. I was really scared I didn’t know who bad her stab wounds were. I didn’t know what hospital they were taking her to, or if she was going to make it or not. I was very upset and so was everybody else. I was super tired and scared . My family went to Regional to check on her. Because that was the hospital they were taking her to. We got there as fast as we could and went to the nurses station and told her my mothers name. She looked for her name. She looked up and said “ I am sorry, we don’t have anybody by that name. We said they are bringing her here, that she was the stab victim from...


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