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Getting Introduced

  • Date Submitted: 11/09/2010 06:20 AM
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A. Introduction .
  B. My car broke down .
  1. The engine started making strange noises.
  2. The engine stopped.
  3. Checking to see what is the problem.
  4. Finding that the car was out of gas.
  C. Asking for help.
  1. Kind people stop to offer help.
  2. Filling the car.
  D. Thanking the person who helped me.
  1. Taking her phone number and inviting her to dinner.
  2. Getting to know her better.
  3. A friendship created.

      During a cold afternoon, I was driving my car, when suddenly it stopped in the middle of nowhere, and at a far distance from any gas station. As I thought of a way to solve my problem, I had no other choice but to wait for any kind of help.
      On that afternoon I took my ride and drove far away towards the gym to workout and relieve my stress. But because of my hastiness, and lack of responsibility I did not notice that my car was running on small quantity of fuel. After 20 or 30 miles on the way the car started making strange noises, and suddenly it stopped. I pulled over to the side of the road, opened the hood, and started looking for the problem. At that moment, I noticed that the car has run out of gas.
      During that time, I became frustrated, because I was in the middle of no were, and did not have enough money to refuel the car. I opened the trunk, pulled out the distress signal, sat beside the car, and waited. Very few cars drove by, and even fewer stopped. After a torturing 3 hours of waiting, a girl in her car stopped right next to me. I was relieved to see that my savior was such a pretty girl. She had green eyes, long brown hair, a very healthy body shape, and a very sweet heavenly voice.
      She came to me and said: “Are you all right do you need help?” So I told her that I was out of gas. As a result she gave me 2 extra fuel gallons, and refused to take any money from me in exchange for her services.
      Finally, before she left I invited her to a cup of coffee to show her...

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