Words of Wisdom:

"My home boys drink juice from the pond." - Curlylights02

Mary Queen of Scots

  • Date Submitted: 01/05/2011 08:11 AM
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HALF LIFE
Written by Lewis Cooper

Chapter 1
"Can't wait to get the new house today said Jane",I wonder what my room looks like?. She rushed upstairs to see. Just then Jane spotted an odd looking door. "What on earth is that Jane thought to herself. "Mum what s that funny looking door doing here"? "Oh Jane I've not time to look right now, "We are putting the suitcase's in the house, and then we're going shopping yelled mum ."Can I come too"?,asked Jane. Nope should have asked earlier exclaimed mum. But you never said earlier said Jane sorry, "oh" sparked mum I know which door you mean "thank you" Jane said in a ungrateful tone. Do not go through that door mum confirmed. "Fine" muttered Jane, not realising they had already gone, Jane walked to her room. Jane suddenly said it's quiet ,too quiet Jane dragged herself downstairs. She stared at the doorway on earth did we buy this house Jane was transfixed on the rusty oval door knob in the hall way,the handle was brightly glowing Jane took a deep breath and put her hand on the door knob opening the door The room was pitch black and smelt damp. Jane walked down the creaky stairs. "I can't see a thing" whispered Jane. Then she remembered the mini touch in her pocket, she took it out and turned it on she could see but only the outline of objects in the room. Suddenly the door shut behind her. What the...what happened!.shouted Jane...silence Ooooooooooh that's just great said Jane sarcastically the lights have just gone out! Then she felt something warm instantly she know it was a pipe it looked stable enough for Jane to grasp she climbed across the pipe it was damp, cold, rough and slimy, Jane got to the end when she noticed a hole. Jane decided to climb up squeezing her body through inch by inch there was a big hole in the attic leading to her house,she climbed through it and jumped down.

To her utter belief her house was dusty,dirty,looked like it had been left for 100 years and deserted. she was shocked.

Jane...

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