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An Adventure

  • Date Submitted: 04/05/2011 04:24 AM
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My class went for a camping trip on December 24th, Friday. I was very excited. Finally Friday came, I woke up early in the morning and ate my breakfast. I said goodbye to my father and mother when the bus came to send me to school, I was so excited that I almost tripped on the floor on my way out.
  When I reached the school, I got down from the bus excitedly to meet my friends. We talked about the trip and decided we will go in groups. I was paired up with my best friend, Kelly.
  Soon, the bus came to take my class to the location of the place for the camping trip. Kelly and I talked excitedly about the camping trip and spent our time playing card games. One of the boys made some funny jokes to make everyone laugh. Kelly and I laughed till our backs ached.
  Just after 5 minutes of the joke, we reached our destination. I couldn’t believe what I saw when I got down from the bus, the whole place was amazing. There were lights and tents everywhere.
  Our teacher said we could wander around the place but not too far. Kelly and I went to admire and take pictures of the magnificent surroundings together.  
  After a short while, Kelly noticed that we were lost in a forest so we stuck together and held hands. We saw a light shining through the forest and we followed it with shaking knees.
  Soon, we noticed that the light lead us to a very deep and dark part of the forest. Kelly ran away safely as she knew the location of where my classmates were, leaving me standing there alone with no idea of which way to go. I decided that since I brought my camping gears, I would camp for the night.
  I set up my tent in the corner of the forest and found some firewood to make fire before I went to sleep.
  I lay down on the mat of my tent, thinking and hoping that maybe Kelly will tell Mrs. Thomas that I am out in the forest alone but I just shook the thought out of my head as I knew that Kelly was a coward and would never have any courage to tell Mrs. Thomas...

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