Prison Break

The escape from prison
Rough draft
*lying on his bunk bed, thinking where everything went wrong, trapped for the wrong reason.
*his friend going to lay out his plan to escape today
*danger of death
*few tools required
*on the day of Eid
*Help from one of the guards
*on his way in the sewers
*out in the open, living a worthless life.
Fair draft
  It was two in the afternoon as Asad came face to face with his cracked watch. He lied there thinking how Allah could have let him end up in this hell like place.
  Asad was caught in the Jinnah international air port for carrying drugs. He knows that the box with a pound of L.S.D. was not his, but who was to believe him when the box was in his backpack .He was jailed for 15 years.
    The buzzer went off; this was part of Asad’s daily routine, when he dragged his body out to the yard where he met Hamza.
  When Asad saw Hamza far away he ran towards him and just gave him a look which meant “please tell me u have the plan to escape already”, and to Asad’s delight, he did.
  He gave Asad a large screw which he quickly had to be shoving it in his sock. Than Hamza told him that he has to remove the sink in his cell and then he should dig through the wall. Hamza said it was a hollow wall and that it leads to the underground swears. To Asad this all was happening all too fast as he could still not shake off the feeling that he would get caught and would be shot dead. Hamza had to science himself as the guard approached their way but he was soon distracted by a fist fight whichbroak out on the yard. Hamza continued and told Asad that he had paid one of the guards to let him sleep in Asad’s cell the night before Eid. Hamza believed that there were less guards than. Asad still had mixed feelings.72 hours till the escape.
  Every night, when no one would hear the sound of him carving away on that hollow wall, he used to work toward his escape, and when his digging for the night was done he used to place the...