Words of Wisdom:

"Never forget who you are and what you feel, because when someone cares that's why." - Phuan

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  • Date Submitted: 04/28/2011 07:27 PM
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…Then Mojo packed a bag, slung his guitar case over his shoulder, and snuck out of the house without saying goodbye to his family. Mojo had been suffered a lot at home by getting all those expectations and pressures from his family. And now, he just wanted to get away from his family, get away from the dentistry, and to start a new life. Mojo took the train to go to New York State. He found a cheap hotel and settled himself in. And then he sat down to think of what he was going to do and what his plans were for future. He checked his wallet and realized that the most urgent thing he needed to do was try to earn some money for his living. He looked around all his stuff; the most valuable thing was his guitar. He went to a pawnshop to ask how much money he could sell for his guitar. However, the owner told him that the guitar was too old to sell for a good price, so maybe it was not a good way to earn money. The owner also told him that although the guitar couldn’t be sold for a good price, it could still be a very good instrument for music. This gave an idea to Mojo. He had been leaning guitar since he was very young. He had really good skills which he used to represent for his schools to attend the music events. He decided to go to New York City to share his beautiful music to people and to earn money by playing his guitar on the street.  
        His girlfriend, Wanda, missed Mojo very much. She didn’t know what happen to Mojo and she hadn’t talked to Mojo since he left. She didn’t know where Mojo was. The only thing she knew was that Mojo loved New York. Wanda got on all kinds of transportations to try to go to New York to find Mojo; however, she got into a car accident. She didn’t hurt her head and she didn’t break her extremities, but most of her teeth were gone. She went to the hospital after she got the accident. At first, she was doing well; her wounds didn’t have any problem. However, as the time went by, the wounds of her teeth got infected, which could...

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