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  • Date Submitted: 05/15/2011 08:09 AM
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We are a group of geography members club had organized a trip in Tanjung Aru Sabah to study about the nature there.   Twenty student in from this geography club   and 5 accompany   lectures where   involved. The trip was done on Monday, which only a day time period, in 24 April 2008.   The twenty student divided into 5 group   which consist of   a accompany lecture and 4 students in each group. The 4 group named as Melati, Melur, Kemboja, Mawar and Teratai.   Mr.bob was the accompany lecture for Melati group,   Mr.Lee, Mr. Zul, Mr.Ali and Mr. Roane as there accompany lecture for   the others   4 group which Melur, Kemboja, Mawar and Teratai.    
Hamdan, the missing person from melati’s group, approximately has 170 cm in height and precisely 66 kilograms for his weight. He has dark brown eyes with a mole under his left eyes. In addition, he must be about 20 years old with his blonde hair. Exaclty, he has a fair complexion and a mustache under his small nose. Besides that, he also has high cheekbones. On that day of his missing, he was in an orange t-shirt with black jacket and blue jeans.
Before his missing, the Melati group was in the middle forest near a long distance and large natural stream of river. The accompany lecturer, Mr. Bob was there to give an explanation about the river but suddenly, there were three of tigers attacked and forced them to run away from that site. Two students from this group climb a tree, a student and Mr.Bob jump into the river. Luckily,the river is not too deep, so that, after a few moments, the tigers leave and both of the students alighted from the tree. The lecturer and Ramli, a student with him, got out from the river. Unfortunately, Hamdan was not there.
We have already given the full information about this case and hopefully, the police can find the missing student in a short time period.


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