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Road Trip

  • Date Submitted: 03/05/2012 11:43 PM
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* The road Trip
My family was loading the car to go to Hilton Head.
When I got my suitcase I gave it to my dad to put in the car. After that I struggled putting my dog in the cage because he was squirming too much. We finally got Coco in his cage and put him in the car and then me Priya, Liam, my mom, and my dad hopped in the car and started driving.

After a few hours the car came to a stop because we where at a pit stop. When we got out of the car my dad put Coco on a leash and walked him

After I went to the bathroom I went in the car and my dad told me Coco was sick. When my Mom, Sister, and Brother came, my dad asked “Where is the nearest vet?” to one of the store managers.

As we were going to the vet I was sort of worried, creeped out, and scared. When we reached the vet I was relived, first of all because Coco was creeping me out second of all the vets would try to make him better. When we went in the veterinarian’s office we made an appointment for Coco and they helped him right away.

They said if we never had brought Coco in time he would have died.

We waited and waited and waited till finally the vet came out of the room Coco was in and said “Your dog needs to stay overnight”. I was thinking are you crazy! You could of said that earlier. Anyway my mom and dad booked us at a hotel. That was the good part. We went to the hotel room and I just fell asleep.

When I woke up the next morning I just wanted to go to the vet. All I could think of was my dog. I wondered if he died or is still alive a few hours later I did find out. So we where diving to the vet and suddenly   I remembered the day I got Coco…

… It was a warm night and we heard the doorbell ring and guess who it was? MY GRAND PARENTS I guess they came because it was my Moms birthday today!   They had a leash it had a white furry thing on it the thing had a tail and ears it looked like a dog to me and it was a dog. I was so happy because all my friends had a dog and I thought it...


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