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  • Date Submitted: 09/12/2012 04:14 PM
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Overcome a challenge
To overcome my challenges in becoming a better person I had to learn from my mistake in trying to fit in with the wrong crowd that I made throughout all my school years. It started to get worse for me because I wanted to look cool so I made bad decisions in life so it just started to get bad with school and in my family.  
Throughout my elementary school year was different I started off as a good kid. Who just wanted to go to school to make new friends. I was a tom boy who didn’t really care what other people thought about me. When I was going to school I was a good kid who just wanted to make it out of school. I would always try and get my work done and wouldn’t try to get into trouble because then it would bring me trouble. I remember there was a time in fifth grade I had girls who would pick on me because I guess they were jealous because I brought to much attention but not from looks but I guess because I got along with everyone. They would pick on me telling me that I dress like a boy and I would get surrounded by others girls because they thought they were better than me. I had hard times with many girls who picked on me all through fifth grade but I was happy just because I realize just because I had many girls who picked on me that didn’t stop me from at least making it out of school.  
Throughout my middle school year there were rough times because when I hit sixth grade I still dressed like a tom boy who just wanted to make it out of life. But when I meet new friends I just wanted to become just like them when I hit seventh grade that’s when I would started to dress differently because I didn’t want anyone to judge me in the way I look. So I started with having my hair down instead of having it up in bun or ponytail and change the way I look. Then I started with putting on mascara and when my mom seen that I was changing my look she asked me if she wanted to teach me how to put make-up on because when I see my mom and I wanted...

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