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The Third Moon of Tagor

  • Date Submitted: 11/07/2012 03:23 PM
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Date:   October 2nd, 2012

The third moon of Tagor
My name is Susan Daveen I am the editor of our school magazine called thunder hall, and I have been watching Mark Widemen ever since Mr.kelso gave me his story about his dying grandfather. I still can’t get over how touching it was, I never knew mark was so sensitive. I wish mark would pay more attention to me instead of Linda Spinelli I mean why wouldn’t he? She’s pretty, she’s got a round face like a little kid and she’s popular, and I’m just a quiet, shy girl who writes for the school magazine. I don’t really have many friends and I’m average looking, I don’t talk to mark a lot but when I do we only talk about the school magazine, But he seems shy I guess. I don’t know anything about him either except his grandfather died and that he is a good author. I really do think mark is a good writer, if he grows up to be a famous author his story could be worth a fortune! I wish we could both write stories about someone we really care and love; we could also both share terrific ideas and make a story together. I always wonder what Mark would like to do? I sometimes wonder if he likes science fiction like me. Or if he likes editing story’s?
Hopefully Mark will pay more attention to me instead of Linda Spinelli. So he will be able to know me better. Until then I will be wishing that one day he realizes that I’m the perfect match for him.


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