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The Best Place I Have Ever Been

  • Date Submitted: 02/11/2013 08:21 AM
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Every summer vacation, in my school days we always went to trip to unfamiliar places. Now despite having passed so many years, whenever we meet with our classmates, we always remember insightful places that we have visited.
One of the most memorable places that made me so surprised was a valley surrounded with giant mountains with white cliffs. Besides, naughty waterfalls recall you playing lovely children in a kindergarten. The bottoms of the mountains were covered with several types of trees, like a forest. Nice flowers smelt fragrance that everyone feels relaxation, when they smell. Moreover, the chirping of birds made wonderful harmony that inspires you to sing about nature. Therefore, all of these things make the valley the greatest place to visit with many good sites to see.
We located near a tiny stream where the water was so clear and tasty. We drank water a lot, and then we started to climb one of the highest mountains. While climbing, we found an ancient legendary cave. Some boys entered inside. Strange animals appeared suddenly, we wanted to follow them, but they immediately disappeared. Engraved stalagmites amazed us, and we went outside of the cave. Finally, we got the top of the mountain; consequently, we could see the whole valley, and scenery was outstanding: the shining sun in the blue sky, lovely wind was caressing smoothly our faces, the silent green world was wonderful below. You just cannot imagine, as standing there it seemed as if you are flying. I had never felt so light before. I had a very good time there, and I was happy for my visiting that place named “Parda Tursun”

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