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Billy the Killer

  • Date Submitted: 03/24/2013 04:00 AM
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“Wait a minute," alarm bells went off in Billy head. He curled his tongue to touch his upper lip. Suddenly, he realized that his landlady just served him a cup of cyanide tea. Billy could no control his rage. He wanted to take revenge.

“May I have another cup of tea, please?” Billy asked. She gave him a generous refill. “I am going to kill you just like you are trying to kill me!” he screamed. Billy threw the coffee pot at his landlady and she screamed and bled to death. He breathed heavily and sat down on the floor next to the dead body.

Billy went to the upstairs to check if there was anyone else. There may be others in the house who wanted to kill me. Suddenly, he heard some kind of breathing sound from the 4th floor. He sneaked upstairs and checked the hallway of the 4th floor. He saw a light at the end of the hallway. He walked down the hallway slowly and silently. There was a person sitting in one of the rooms and he was alive. Billy was puzzled because he thought that all his landlady's visitors were dead

The person was Christopher, and he was in the list of visitors. “Hi, I am Billy, and I am staying here.” Billy said.

“Oh, I am Christopher, and I am 20 years old.” Christopher said.

“What are you doing here?” Billy asked.

“I ran away from my home because my drunkard father always hits me and I wanted my freedom” Christopher said.

“I hope that you can get freedoms and bye!” Billy shouted. There was another guy next to his room.

Billy was not sure that he was alive or dead. He knocked the door, and door made strange noises as it swung open. “Excuse me, is this Gregory?” He asked softly.

“Yes, I am, you murderer!” Gregory said.

“Wait, what did you say just now?” Billy the murderer asked nervously.

“I saw that you kill our landlady!” Gregory shouted.

“You saw everything. I need to….. kill you too,” Billy smiled like an insane person. Billy grabbed a pencil that Gregory was using and stabbed the pencil through his neck. He bled like a...


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