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My Trip to Disney

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My trip to Disney
Last summer I went to Orlando, Florida with my family. We stayed there for three days in a beautiful resort hotel next to Disneyland. We visited the three theme parks: Magic Kingdom, Hollywood Studios, and Epcot. It was a wonderful and magical experience, we had so much fun and made memories that will be forever in our hearts.
The First day we went to Disney’s Hollywood Studios, where most of the Disney’s movies characters are. In this park they presented a lot of musical shows such as high school musical live and camp rock live, also the Indiana Jones live show, which was really fantastic. Besides the shows I took a ride on the Tower of Terror, which was really scary and I consider it as the most thrilling game ever.
The second day my family and I went to Epcot, this was my favorite park of all of them.   I like this park because it has a very cultural sense and I learned a lot about different countries in the world. I really enjoyed it because I felt almost as if I were visiting the real countries. My favorite countries that I visited in the cultural tour were Mexico, Norway and Japan.
The last day we visited the Magic Kingdom Park that has most of the classical attractions. My family and I took a lot of pictures with Disney classical characters. At night they made a stunning firework show that seemed magical and almost unbelievable, they also did a slideshow with pictures that were taking during that day in the park.
This was a really great experience that I will never forget. I wish I could relieve again or even better go on another Disney Trip to visit the rest of the Disney Park and create new memories.


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March 5th,2013
Santo Domingo, Republica Dominicana


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