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Writing Dialouge

  • Date Submitted: 11/29/2013 02:03 PM
  • Flesch-Kincaid Score: 91.4 
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Open on Marvin sitting on his coach, there is a heavy rapid knocking on his door
MARVIN
(Gets up and open the door, Frank walks through) ‘Well hello, what are you doing here?’
FRANK
(Looks around rapidly, and nervously) ‘Hey…um hey, close the door man.
MARVIN
(Slowly closes the door)   ‘What’s up man?’
FRANK
(Throws himself down on Frank’s coach) ‘Nothing man, nothing; let’s just hangout, watch T.V. or something!’
MARVIN
(Slowly sits down next to Frank) ‘Well…okay.’
FRANK
(After a minute) ‘They took her Marv. They took her from me!’
MARVIN
‘Who took who from you?’
FRANK
‘I don’t know man some repo company came by and swiped Mary Ann from me!’
MARVIN
‘Wait who is Mary Ann?’
FRANK
(Shoots a glare at Marvin) ‘Mary Ann is my 1987 corvette’
MARVIN
‘Wait I thought you were driving that mustang, Lisa’
FRANK
‘Come on man I haven’t be driving Lisa for months now. I gave her to my little brother.
MARVIN
‘But I though we took Lisa to the movies like last week?’
FRANK
‘Come on man! We took Mary Ann; I told you all about her on the way there!’
MARVIN
(Rubs head) ‘I thought we were talking about the movie.’
FRANK
‘How do you function when you’re this oblivious?’
MARVIN
‘Come on man, we were seeing that racing movie. I thought you were just really into it.
FRANK
‘WE SAW THE LION KING!’
MARVIN
‘No way’
FRANK
‘For god sakes man’
MARVIN
‘Wait if your car, wait excuse me. If Mary Ann how did you get here?
FRANK
‘I walked like a normal person man’
MARVIN
‘Hm, that’s a long way to walk’
FRANK
(Stands up) ‘I LIVE DOWN THE STREET’ (Storms out the door)

MARVIN
‘What an interesting character. It’ll be nice to get to know him

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