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"What goes around, comes around..we just don't know how big the wheel is" - EmardikaggimA

My Personal Information

  • Date Submitted: 10/16/2014 06:08 PM
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My personal information
Here is my personal information, including my family, childhood, education and major.
My family is a small, but happy, one. It consist of my parents and me. My father is a civil servant. He works very hard and sets a good example for me. My mother is retired and she often cooks nice dishes for me. So I love my parents very much.
My childhood was kind of boring. When I was a child, I was too shy to talk to strangers. So I spent most of my   time alone at home. Besides, I had very few toys and I didn’t like books. So I had very little to do every day.
My education background is interesting. Actually I studied laboratory medicine, which belongs to clinical medicine, at Dalian Medical University and got a bachelor's degree there. However I prefer to study biological science, so I enter PKU to study Ph.D. in biology.
My major area of research is stem cell. I believe stem cell is promising and is likely to cure most diseases. There are still many questions about stem cells. I want to figure them out.
The above is my personal information. If you want to know more, you can email my address.
Jeremy--thank you for telling me a bit about yourself. I think you need to work on paragraph development.   Most of your paragraphs are too short.   They generally lack both good topic sentences and good concluding sentences. Your grammar is not bad, but you have made a number of mistakes in the form of the words that you have chosen.

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