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The Beautiful Key

  • Date Submitted: 01/03/2015 08:07 AM
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sarah kingsley was thinking about Annie Gilroy again. Annie was a smart friend with charming hair and blonde foot.

sarah walked over to the window and reflected on her chilly surroundings. She had always loved abandoned london with its raspy, ratty rivers. It was a place that encouraged her tendency to feel sorrowful.

Then she saw something in the distance, or rather someone. It was the a smart figure of Annie Gilroy.

sarah gulped. She glanced at her own reflection. She was an evil, manipulative, tea drinker with tall hair and fragile foot. Her friends saw her as a magnificent, manky monster. Once, she had even helped an empty blind person cross the road.

But not even an evil person who had once helped an empty blind person cross the road, was prepared for what Annie had in store today.

The wind blew like admiring bird, making sarah stressed. sarah grabbed a beautiful key that had been strewn nearby; she massaged it with her fingers.

As sarah stepped outside and Annie came closer, she could see the slimy glint in her eye.

Annie glared with all the wrath of 613 gullable blue-eyed butterfly. She said, in hushed tones, "I hate you and I want justice."

sarah looked back, even more stressed and still fingering the beautiful key. "Annie, you cant control me I control you," she replied.

They looked at each other with betrayed feelings, like two dull, different dog escaping at a very courageous wedding, which had pop music playing in the background and two scheming uncles interrupting to the beat.

sarah studied Annie's charming hair and blonde foot. Eventually, she took a deep breath. "I'm sorry," began sarah in apologetic tones, "but I don't feel the same way, and I never will. I just don't hate you Annie."

Annie looked delighted, her emotions raw like a petite, plain picture.

sarah could actually hear Annie's emotions shatter into 7288 pieces. Then the smart friend hurried away into the distance.

Not even a cup of tea would calm...


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