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Trip to Usa

  • Date Submitted: 08/27/2010 01:42 PM
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My first flight trip to USA was one of the most memorable thing   [was the most memorable thing /was one of the most memorable things] in my life because, when I was young, I wanted fly [to fly] a plane. I could remember everything about my first flight experience. When my husband got a job in   the USA, we were in India, so we moved to   the USA. I was so excited when I heard that we are going to fly in flight.
I remember going into the airport and just looking at the huge airplanes. I remembered staring at one plane and thinking it was so big. It was bigger than most of the other planes and was gray with a red stripe. I sat there and staring at it for a couple of minutes and my husband came over and told me that was the plane we were going to be on, and he told me it was called the international flights. I sat there a minute longer in disbelief. Once we got onto the plane and sat down, I started to look around at everything around me. I noticed the small white air vents right above my head with little lights next to the vent. It was so great because the controls were right on my armrest. There was a place on the armrest to plug in the head phones in order to listen to music. I noticed that there was a big screen up on the wall that separated for first class passengers from economy passengers. My husband said “That is the screen to watch movies on”. The small monitor hang [a small monitor/Small monitors hung] in front of all seats. I could not believe that I could watch a movie while traveling since I was driving everywhere with no television in the car, so I found that to be great. After everyone got settled into their seats, the air hostess came over the intercom and explained all of the safety procedures. They also showed everyone how to put the seat belts on correctly. After the air hostess was done with the safety procedures, we began our flight [to move] out to the runway


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