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President

  • Date Submitted: 11/06/2012 07:07 AM
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Oscar Guzman                                                                                                                       9/19/2012
            8O2                                                                                                                                 ELA


    What I would like to change? If I’m president I would like to change…. What I would like to keep? If I’m president I would like to keep…. What food I would like to be served? The food that I would like to served…. I would like to change a lot of thing.
    If I’m president I would like to change on the school is some of the teacher. I would like to change some of the teacher because there are some teacher that don’t know how to teach. I would make these teacher better is practice or give him a test/exam. Also I would like to change the food on school. The food that I would like to served good rise and good chicken and better food.
    If I’m president I would like to keep the technology on the school. I would like to keep the technology because the technology can help you do your work and your homework. Also I would like to keep high school. I would like to keep high school because so the kids don’t have to move to other school.   If you go to other new school you going to be strange.  
    If I’m president I would like to help some of the kids. I would like to help some of the kids because some of them don’t have money. A lot of the kids don’t have money because the parents are poor. I would like to put lock because we have a lot of notebook and that not well to your health. If they put lock on the school can be much better to the students.
    In conclusion: if I’m President I going to be a good one. But I don’t want to be president because the president has too much responsibility. For example the president has to be sure that all the public school are getting lunch and all are fine. Also he has to be sure that the country is fine and nothing is going on.

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