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"For when we die, it is not the end, but the beginning for some one else" - DEBJIT


  • Date Submitted: 11/28/2013 03:33 AM
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Dear Admission Officer,
As Mr. Xiong Xiaoyong’s adviser of his bachelor’s degree thesis, I am glad to recommend him to your master’s programme. As far as I am concerned, Mr. Xiong has good academic potential and strength, apart from his serious and pragmatic attitude at work. Xiaoyong’s plan to study abroad will grant him with advanced ways of study and research.
In Xiaoyong’s senior year in the college, I began to guide him graduation thesis. I have witnessed how Xiaoyong accomplished his work after overcoming this long-drawn and arduous process. With the topic, Partition on Nanpu Sunken Fluid Dynamic Field, Mr. Xiong began to dig into the related knowledge in this field. Thanks to his perseverance and solid professional skills, Xiong successfully completed his tasks and has gained compliment from teachers.
What impressed me most is his daily performance toward this work. Every day, in addition to the data processing in the office, he would carefully read a great number of documentations. Mr. Xiong would never be afraid of raising doubts. On the contrary, he would air many different opinions before consulting teachers and senior students in the office. His strong communication ability and congenial manner received good reputation. During discussions, I also realized Xiaoyong’s capacity of independent thinking. He is such an aspiring student. Especially, he has great enthusiasm toward further studies of Petroleum Geoscience.
After in-depth research and data querying, Mr. Xiong presented me with a logical and well arranged paper. His article was sufficient in arguments and filled with front edge information in petroleum geology field. Standing high in popular favor, Xiong’s thesis obtained a high score of A.  
As a qualified candidate for your respectful university, Mr. Xiong Xiaoyong has demonstrated great intellectual potential, which he can readily tap in his further studies for the realization of his ambition. I hereby lend my support to Mr. Xiong’s...


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