Words of Wisdom:

"Only dead fish swim the stream" stephen graham " - Whytee


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Two things didn't mix well in my life.   One was being a full time student and the other an athlete.  

It was great not having parents around telling you to do your homework or to go to class, of which I never

did.   I had a choice, which was more important, playing lacrosse or studying.   Like any first year college

student I picked lacrosse.   At that point I didn't realize what I was getting myself into.   Who at that age

would know either?

My worst nightmare came true in the summer of 1989.   I was academically dismissed from the

university.   I thought to myself "no way, this could never happen to me, I played lacrosse, had a girlfriend,

and I was popular, how could this have happened".   The worst part of the whole experience was the car ride

home from the post office.   The feeling of emptiness overwhelmed me, I felt as if I had nothing inside my

body.   I thought, "what am I going to do?"   Then I had to face my parents, boy was I scared.   What was I

going to tell them?   Sorry mom and dad but I wasted your money; I had no excuses so I told them the truth.  

What happened after that changed my life forever.

It was either the military or go to a community college and try to redeem myself.   I wanted to do

neither, but I had to choose.   The military was off my list and going to a community college sounded o.k.  

So I registered and the rest of that summer I had to deal with the fact that I had not accomplished anything

in the past year and this was wake up call and the only chance I had left to prove to myself that I could do

something.   The fall semester rolled around and I realized that I wanted to do the work for myself not for

anyone else.   This proved to be beneficial, for I received a 3.67 grade point average for that semester.   That

spring was just as good, that year my grade point average was a 3.46.   I was happy, and so were...


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