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Unexpected

  • Date Submitted: 09/11/2014 03:55 PM
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Unexpected
Chapter 1: You really don't know me
Martin entered the kitchen in a pair of boxers and no shirt. It was two o'clock in the morning so he didn't think anyone was going to be downstairs.
He walked over to the refrigerator and took a gallon of milk out. Then proceeded to the carbonate he took out a glass cup. He poured him a glass of milk and opened a bag of chocolate chip cookies.
Yesterday, Martin had the worst day of the year. Not only did a new freshman that just started a month ago take his position as captain of the baseball team, his girlfriend cheated, Ruthie is dating this jerk, and his dad got deployed back to duty.
Martin been with his girlfriend, Rachel, for 6 month now and because he wasn't ready to have sex with her yet she found somebody else. It wasn't that he was saving his self because he wasn't a virgin it was that he didn't want to feel like he had to have sex with her, he wanted it to be special because he really loves her. But since, he found out that she cheated on him with his best friend Mac, his heart has been torn and he's so confused of what to do next.
Martin didn't hear Ruthie make her way down the stairs; he was too into his thoughts. She leaned against the wall staring at him. She's wanted to see what was under his shirt for so long and his body was amazing. Finally, deciding to interrupt his thoughts because she knew he was having a hard time with everything that happened yesterday.
"Martin, are you okay?" she asked
Martin jumped a little bit before turning around to face her. He tried to cover his self with a clean dish tile that was hanging up, "How long you've been standing there? And stop looking at me I don't have any clothes on."
Ruthie shook her head and laughed as she went to the other side of the the table and sat down, "You didn't answer my question, are you okay?"
Martin looked at Ruthie and put his head down; softly he spoke, "Is that a serious question?"
"Yes."
"How in the world can I be okay? My...

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