Words of Wisdom:

"An apple a day keeps the doctor away.... but if da doctor's a cutie!......screw da damn fruit!" - Xmisfitsx310


  • Date Submitted: 01/23/2015 11:32 AM
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Every person would have a confidant. Confidants are people who welcome you unconditionally.. is somebody whom we look upon, respect and aspire to be like. It could be somebody at home, or anywhere whom you have met or seen at some part of your life. Their good qualities would make you want to be like them. My confidants are my mother, father, best friends Jordan and Jayla, my brother, my boyfriend Kenyatta, and lastly myself.

My mother is somebody whom I look upon. I always wonder how she manages the entire task together and so wonderfully and gets everything done on time and neatly. She is a working mom and she manages the house so very well. She does her office work and gets back home on time, makes lovely and delicious food for us every day, does all the household chores alone and makes sure that all payments are also done on time. She and I may bump heads but it is only because I am a teenage girl. When I was younger and couldn’t sleep she would make up this story about a family of grapes and the giant grapefruit. As I get older I feel our relationship will grow and become how we used to be when I was younger.

My father possesses certain qualities that I admire. He’s loving, caring, selfless, hard-working, and he displays great morals. My father has won the battle of teaching me how to become a lady because he has shown me not only the basic girly things I already knew of course, but he taught me how to NEVER take negative comments to heart. My father has been very patient with me; he has never given up on me and encouraged me to be a good model citizen. Throughout the years where I have been growing with my father, I have find out that he is a father that cares about people about having a good, health, and wealthy future where they don’t have to worry about much. Within him, the ones he most cares about is his family his children. He is a father that everyone time he feels that his children need advice about life and also doesn’t doubt in giving us...


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