Words of Wisdom:

"I know I am but what are you?" - Diane


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When Mrs. Fallon first described this project to us, I was a little bit skeptical

        about it. I kept thinking that I had no problems in my life and that I didn’t

        need any type of conditioning. But then I thought, I’m definitely not perfect

        and I knew I was definitely overlooking something. Recently I was diagnosed

        with ADHD (Attention Deficit Hyperactive Disorder) and I felt like I was

        cheated out of so many years that could have been productive ones. So I

        decided that for my conditioning project I would test how much medication I

        should use that would keep my body stable enough to begin a sort of healing

        and moving on process, kind of like a second chance. After I finished my

        conditioning I realized that I was a lot different then when I started. My

        parents noticed that once I started the project, I was paying attention a lot

        more to what they were saying to me. My mother was worried though that I

        was going to hurt myself by taking a lot of the medication, but I told her that

        people have experimented on themselves before and look at the results. I

        also had calmed down with my dorm mates. I felt a lot more comfortable

        around them and I had begun to trust them a lot more. I now felt like I had

        accomplished something to make my physical body and my mental body

        better. In the areas of school I felt like I had accomplished a lot. I was

        handing in reports and I understood things I was learning. In high school I had

        trouble in most of my classes and my grades were up and down. I felt like I

        finally overcame something that bothered me more than anything. As a person

        interacting with other people from another ethnic...


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