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"Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any one thing. Abraham Lincoln" - The_god_damned


  • Date Submitted: 07/21/2013 07:55 AM
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In my holiday, I am and my big family had a family trip. We went to “Puncak bogor” we were there for 2 days. before we go to "puncak bogor" in the bus we praying to gods for safety. after we arrive to "puncak bogor" we are playing around in there and we have “race” like futsal, dancing, and singing. We have fun in there, I participate in a futsal competition but I don’t win in that competition. In first day I and my big family having fun in there. But in the night its all change in morning we have fun but in the night its so scary cause my sister see someone like a “ghost” in the bathroom. I don’t believe, so I go to check it alone to the bathroom, in there I don’t see anything.   After I check it I go to meet my sister and say to her “just relax maybe you tired”, after that my sister sleep with my parents. Iam and my brother go walking around in our villa, we hope we can see the “ghost or something stranger”, maybe 1 hour we walk we don’t see anything like “ghost” after that we going to sleep. In morning we are swimming in there, after that we go back to Jakarta, its rainy I scare in the bus cause I think the way it was slippery. But we are arrive in Jakarta safely. This is my end story for my holiday, and the first time I write this. I’m sorry if its not so good.


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