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Cause and Effect

  • Date Submitted: 01/28/2010 05:15 AM
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‘’Think of one success in your life. Discuss the probably causes of why it happened. Also discuss one effect it had on you.’’

Some years ago, I noticed that the level of competition in life is very high. Many people argue about whether on not, we ought to try to succeed. Unfortunately people of a business status are strictly characterized as more successful. So for some people the main concern is money but for others success is defined as an amount of feelings.

Last year, my company had signed for the construction of a new football stadium, so it was essential for me to develop the way of a firmly progression. Firstly the most important factor which could affect this job was the revival of the computerized system. It had been accepted by the opponents that only with the cooperation of a new three dimensional computer aided program with the company’s existed numerical control equipment, could the job be finished.

Secondly it was in the company’s hands to manage and to develop a famous image in its working environment. Employees would not have accepted this transformation from a compatible machine to a new one, without the proper education and consequently all were depended on the manager’s ability to effectively run the procedures; otherwise it would have failed.

Had I not tried so hard, I would not have gained a lot of money. As a graduate person from the University of Economics, I had obtained the chance of a well paid job. As a result I had satisfied my commercial desires with the completion of the job in July of 2004. But is that success real happiness?

  In conclusion, it is believed that hard work sometimes ensures happiness. If only I were alone without a lovely family, I would focus on the professional success. In short, there is another coefficient which not only determines, but also contributes to the success or failure of a person. Finally some people will not give brainpower for it, but I wish they would. ...


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