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Trip to a Different Place

  • Date Submitted: 10/03/2010 12:29 PM
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Every other year my family and I used to take a trip to a different state or country for a month. It was 4 years ago when it was the last time for me to have a trip with them, that month we had a trip to different cities and left to Chile for a 3 weeks. Still it is as soon as you see the entrance sign, a sudden magic feeling bubbles through your head and body knowing a couple of weeks that were waiting of relaxing ecstasy is about to be established in. Rolling down the screeching window of the bus I could smell the different kind of air that another country had brought me to, almost smell the salty sand and sea, miles later I could see the glassy sea, and taste the fresh environment that I had arrived, no contamination, no affection to be found or bothered, just plain smell of quiet and glamorous peace.
We got set up in our Hotel as soon as the taxi, that was waiting for us when we got out the bus, we ran out of our rooms and not even setting ourselves up to relax after a couple of hours being as uncomfortable as it was. As a melody was: to hear the waves break and the fresh and cool sea calling my name. Days kept flying by and at the end we would swim without worrying about it in the luminosity calm sea. We drove 2 hours ago of our destiny were I was able to catch fishes and make necklaces with sea shells, which I will never will forget the salty smell and quietness. But as the sun leaves us, the sea water will become warm after all our sunny day. It was filled of bright and twinkling stars all the sky. It was beautiful and quiet as like an artist had thrown a container of glitter in the sky. Being after a couple of days back to our house beach for rent, weather was warm keeping itself as cool as summer place, not keeping or making you not able to brief. I was able to feel the heat touching my face and my family had bomb fire where all smoke almost perfumed your clothes. We made ourselves some marshmallows and also made some hot dogs hamburgers, corn, and some...


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