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  • Date Submitted: 10/22/2010 07:55 AM
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The story that stays forever by Owen
The story Titanic was such a tragedy, form 10 April 1912, she set off on her maiden voyage from Southampton England to NY City.   Four days into the crossing, at 23:40 on 14 April 1912, she struck an iceberg and sank at 2:20 the following morning, resulting in the deaths of 1,517 people, but don’t be sad, there is still hope and there is.   This story isn’t the worst, but maybe will be the most epic story ever on earth; today once you have read this paragraph there I shall rediscover the history once again.
(April 10th 1912):
The storm has stop there is a sudden slices of cold wind coming from the north, nothing but people cheering and the sound of camera flashing, and everyone is excited about getting early on this gigantic ship of theirs, but there is a boy, no actually a young handsome man. Staring out the sea, his eye looks a bit pale and he is young and tall. His hair is moving by the wind, then the man say a beautiful young women also standing next to the pole, he wandered and stared, but then the woman had notices, she peered at him with a cold look. But then she just turned around.
The night has come darkness has surround the sky, it’s even rare to every see the sky again. The young woman flowed through to the dinner area, she sits down and enjoying her meal, a man came but there is something strange about this man, this man isn’t as poorly dressed as the handsome man. He looks a lot richer and cooler. They had dinner and he walked with her to her beautiful room, the room is full of light and petty. And a guy came with blue crystals with shinny diamonds on it, you came even see the brightness of the Jew far away, and you will be trapped by its rich and awesomeness. But then she didn’t really like it and she did not want to marry her, so she tries to kill herself, the wind started again, and when she felt she was ready   she takes her moments and think about her past and really to go to another world. When she moves...


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