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The Day When Everything Went Wrong

  • Date Submitted: 11/13/2011 06:50 AM
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Worst days are considered the longest days ever to last.it was the mid of June and the name of thing parachute was stuck in the mouths of the paratrupers who would jump of plane and enjoy seeing the map of cities and seas down them.
About 8:30am my watch tried to wake me up with it's click clock but me sleepy head didn't wake and suddenly my mom smashing the door with the wall woke me up.My eyes went on the clock that showed me 8:40,i got up quickly to arrange for my parachuting day.the teacher scolded me for being late but later we went inside the plane for our departure with our parachutes on our back.as we reached the level when we had to jump off the plane subsequently one by one jumped,when i jumped my 6th sense made me realize that something worst would happen in the next few moments.
It was the time to press the button for opening the parachute,as i pressed it didn't work and after several tries still it didn't work and the gravitational forces pulled me towards the earth and i was going to fall in the 'GREAT AMAZON JUNGLE'.the prayers of safety were on verge and bang i fell into the trees.ouch it hurted me but i was not crazy of staying there for the remaining day.After alot of struggle,i reached my knife and trimmed of the fabric.i fell over banyn trees that didn't hurt me but b y the fear of snakes and dangerous creatures i fell over the ground.The darkness had started to spread and dusk was on it's peak.the fireflies glowed with their superb colours,birds went back to their nests for their nestling's and the dark angels means the vampire bats flew of their dark caves.
The place seemed to be clear at the west side where the sun set and i tattered through the woods in the search of a protective shelter   for myself to spend the monsotorous night in.i travelled several miles and reached the deadliest place that had the smell of rotten egg and the water level increased every hour.there were shrubs that helped me by getting me out of the hell.when i came to...


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