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Young People Who Live and Don't Live at Home Have Several Advantages

  • Date Submitted: 10/07/2013 06:48 AM
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Place that I would like to visit

My dream has many places that I like to visit, it is kind of Island. Generally, Island is different from another place such as, give a good view of the forest, the ocean, the beaches are refreshing and relaxing. Island has been the place where almost of people likes to go some holiday after their work and spends time with families. The place that I would like to visit is Bali Island. It is the popular place in Asia, there are three reasons.  
Firstly, Bali Island is the famous Island of the Gods, danpasar with its diverse landscape of hills and mountains, strong seashore and sandy beaches, all places are good view of colorful. Bali Island has a lot of cool resort. There are many of transport to help you visit around in Bali. Banana boats, parasailing or jet skiing, swimming On the beach, it is also have boat rent for tourist and also have surfing and diving. We can teats traditional food of Bali Island.

Seconds, a consideration is the tourist season and Bali can get very crowded in August and September and again at Christmas and New Year. Australians also visit during school holidays in early April, late June and late September, while domestic tourists from everywhere in Indonesia visit during national holidays. Outside these peak seasons, Bali can be surprisingly quiet and good discounts on accommodation.
Thirds, popular Bali Island
To sum up, Bali Island is the popular place in Asia.


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